This actually doesnt sound bad. But it is very minimalistic and its not really musical. If this was scored to some game cut scene or some movie scene or something, and it was really well thought out and scored, this could pass as any cinematic music piece I suppose.
But with only audio to go with it, theres nothing to really carry you away. Not trying to dictate your artistic creativity, but try to make a piece that is a bit more musical. And if you like this minimal ambental sound either find some realy lush moving pad or a pluck with some well made reverb or something to fill it out and mix in the snare drums a bit better.
I hope this criticism doesnt put you down, as I said its by all means not bad. Keep at it and make more tracks :)